(from the archives; wrote sometimes back when I really believed a particular relationship had a future, inspite of all the drama ...ah! well)
There's a way you call my name
My breath pauses in amazement
When I see you
My heart skips many a beat
This still puts me in wonder-
How does the coconut gets its water
Our palms the hieroglyphics
None can claim full awareness
We met them so…and like them
Of all our truths, this much is proven
Friendship is our support
Relationships our cloak
We know the Queen by the glitter of her tiara
A chieftain is stood out by his beads
There's a star, nay, two
Whose twinkle stand you out of ten thousands
When you have no one behind you
One falls like a Lackadaisical
With you, I strut like a ruling king
Look at the hoe, see its sharpness
We are ready to heap the ridges
I have seen the vision, beautiful queen
Our homecoming with the bountiful harvest
We who were thought unable to pitch a tent
See how the midday sun bathes our palace
You are my One
Of course yam cant replace pounded yam
You are my cloak
Come love me once more Beloved
I’ll peel yam on the fire, and
My amala making will span the whole street
In this Lovu wantintin feferity.
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if guy fit write this type for me, i go turn into baby making machine...
ReplyDeletelovely!
Of course you would bring food into a love poem. Typical African man.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, you do have a way with words, lucky girl.
Lemme guess..
ReplyDeleteYou wrote this and then.. poof!!
Reality knocked!!
Nice one!
my brother, this love knocked you down!!! whatever became of it? care to share?
ReplyDeleteawww....
ReplyDeletewith u I strut like a ruling king.
Double awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....
so err...whatever happened ManCee?
Ah make we hear the tori na
ReplyDelete>>>Chayoma,
ReplyDeleteLOL @ Baby Making Machine
Well the chic didnt share that view...apparently. She got it and sent a stinker back..ouch!
Ah well! shit happens eh?
>>RocNaija
lol
Lets just say it hit me like a rock
>>bArOquE, Brokeass, Nice Anon
The gist is rather boring (and sad?): I was in a supposedly long term relationship for like 3.5 yrs that was headed nowhere and it did take its toll...I walked away when I finished my entire life's supply of "unwarranted optimism". Boring, shay?
lol
>>Caramel,
Guilty as charged, what can I say? The way to an african man's heart is not just down south o..
lol
Thanx Y'all.
If I do get round to writing a replica of the events, I should title it "UNWARRANTED OPTIMISM"
lol
...thats what NO ONE should run a relationship on.
Stay smiling :-)
Lol @ NiceAnon, I think you're officially my comment hero!
ReplyDeleteAnyway, really nice... I like the originality a lot
Gist!
ReplyDeleteSee lyrics!
ReplyDeletePS. Whats with you and Shaggy?
Eyah... sorry oh. For some reason this poem makes me think of farming and cooking the traditional way. In fact it's gor me craving cocoyam and some kinda soup...
ReplyDeleteu no u didnt tell us wat later happened....aww..loved the poem though!
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ReplyDeleteCrazy isn't it? Poetic words that are formed from just loving someone.
ReplyDeleteGood one!
lol@caramel typical african man..
ReplyDeleteAbeg who doesn't like food..lol
"You are my one of course yam can't replace pounded yam"..lol true story.
hmmmmm...I like your writings :)...my amala making will span the whole street. I think that's my favourite line cos u know I love my amala! lol
ReplyDeleteu and pounded yam! lol@ feferity.
ReplyDeleteoriginal and different.
I esp. like the title.
How did amala enter inside this?? lol I should read this slowly
ReplyDeleteWow! This is Amala love. Lol. A Very creative piece. It's funny folks here are re-echoing the food part of the poem. Who no like food? Now u make me want to eat Amala. I have not eaten Amala for years now. It's funny love does not turn out the way we want it to sometimes.Hop u good sha.
ReplyDeleteoooh Mancee i like this side of you. I like very much.
ReplyDeletelol@ Amala making....
>>miss.fab
ReplyDeleteTanx
>>archiwiz, Leggy,
Maybe...
>>tobenna
Thanx
Shaggy was my room mate...and was an object of much disgust, wonder, hate, laughter etc. Overall I enjoyed the time we spent together...
>>Miss Lowlah
lol
Glad to have re-awakened your inner naija.
>>blogoratti
Abi? Love is a voice of the multitude. It lends expression to our inner Being
Thanx
>>BSNC
I'm feeling that thou art a Pounded Yam Lover
*wink*
>>Miss Natural
Ah! An unabashed naija person. Ever tried it with bens soup?.
lol. Oh my...!
Thanx
>>Omo Oba
Thank you, thank you HRH
>>*Dith*
Lol
Read it slowly...through the eyes of your inner naija. lol
>>Today's ranting
lol
Apparently a lot of nostalgia running around...I'm pleasantly surprised that my ppl can sniff out correct mealies from a jumble of words.
Yeah Loving sucks sometimes...
>>Tigeress
Tanku, tanku fery fery mush
:-)
Thanks Y'all. Thanks for speaking out of the multitude, Mancee appreciates your 'yarnings'...very much.
:-)
We are still waiting on the full gist! Haba! How long e go take you to update us on that?
ReplyDeletehave i called u a wimp today? ok. now i have! tut tut if i'd read a POEM this mushy from a guy i was seeing i'd run for the hills too. ......after laughing hysterically at him.
ReplyDeletesorry have no romantic side whatsoever
lemme guess? this was 4 Chine ABC
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