Tears sear,yeah
Tears cleanse, hence
Tears were made,to aid
Humans' journey thru life
I am a man,
I need not prove it to anyone
But I refuse
To be caused tears by anyone
If I cry, when I do
Twill be merely for release
To help ManCee's journey thru life
-ManCee
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ReplyDeletethirddddddddddddddddddd!
ReplyDelete*panting* okay i need to stop... rather childish behaviour i must say *frowning at self*
ReplyDeleteokay nice poem... yes it is perfectly okay to cry...
dont make a habit of it though... it could get creepy!
wow. nice bruv.... like the simplicity of the rhyme
ReplyDeleteyep, i refused to be caused tears by anyone too.
ReplyDeleteNice one
nice...
ReplyDeleteplease dnt make it a habit esp infront of ur gf cs its so not cute to watch a boy cry unless hes asking u to come back..lol.nice!
ReplyDeletelast time i checked i wasn't able to leave comments on this blog..
ReplyDeletegood to see it works now..
I wrote this on Notion's Lyrics blog and just re-produced it here...
ReplyDelete@ Tyger,
Girl, You're off the shizzle
lol
HABIT?! Eskwuse me.
I dont do that ...
Danny,
Tanx Bro
Please call again :-)
@Jayla,
Yep.
But the issue isnt crying rather crying bcos of some idiot's bad habits
@BSNC,
Tanx
;-)
@Leggy
Wooh, wooh! Process check here...
I DO NOT think a broda should cry for his gf 2 come back. What if she still says NO? Then her last pixof him is of a cry babay!? Hell NO.
Its all good tho
;-)
@Da Roc,
Hey Bruv,
Lets see some footprints, eh?
:-)
Thanks Y'all
@Danny,
ReplyDelete(I couldnt leave this on ur blog *wondering why*...so I'm putting it here. LOL)
Pleading the philosophy behind Einstein's relativity, I beg to differ.
Per thermodynamics
We need to reealise that the pounding process is a natural mystery in that it is a closed system! The energy seemingly expended in poundign actually gets converted into various forms. The more obvious ones being the one which tensions the muscles (and build muscles BTW), the produced sound and the pounded end product which the GIT of the eater converts to "satisfaction energy"(SE).
Sadly, there is no very objectively calibrated 'satsfacto-meter' to measure this..else we would have been able to show beyond all doubt that the summation of forces is zero. In alignment with the Newton's thermodynamics.
On use of electric pounder
Less energy is expended in the making, thus less matter available for conversion to Satisfaction Energy
:-)
QED
*phew
Poundo yam? Na Yamz?
...like it is said in naija, 'If e no be panadol, e no fit be like panadol'
REally nice....,
ReplyDeleteIts been a long time since I used QED. the good ol' days of further maths men. I think the SE theory is even more catching than the post i came to comment on. i dzoke but uh, an electric pounder really?
ReplyDeleteyea, cry baby cry. just dont cry in front of me.
its funny u wrote about tears..i basically cried through the night..lol..
ReplyDeletei like how u wrote this..
p.s. thanks for stopping by :)
hey i'm feeling the poem, and thanks for the comment
ReplyDeletePheonix
ReplyDeleteTanx
OmoOba
My fav AJ-babe
...I hope u sabi pound o
;-)
ButterCee
Whateva happened?
Wish I could call U up and sing Bobby McFerrin's "DOnt Worry , Be happy" to you
*sigh*
Hope it wasnt coz of a guy...send me his home addy. I have this guy in miami itching to do "visitations" for me...
Notion
Poetry in Motion
Bruv, Rhyme smooth like lotion...
;-)
Nice poem!
ReplyDeleteu really are a wimp. tut tut
ReplyDelete>>Today's R
ReplyDeleteTanx
:-)
>>incoherent
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